Hey, that's not bad - better than your average high school product for sure
On the plus side, very Tarantino-esque with the plot twists and carnage, but more tasteful than Tarantino (who needs all the gore, really?). Loved the camera point of view and noir color
Only constructive criticism I'd give is to work on the dialogue delivery. Public speaking and acting dialogue both involve different speech pacing than you'd expect in order to sound good to the audience - it's different than normal speech patterns - much slower with more dramatic pauses and enunciation.
Cool though - it was fun to watch. Post more if you got 'em
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Hey, that's not bad - better than your average high school product for sure
On the plus side, very Tarantino-esque with the plot twists and carnage, but more tasteful than Tarantino (who needs all the gore, really?). Loved the camera point of view and noir color
Only constructive criticism I'd give is to work on the dialogue delivery. Public speaking and acting dialogue both involve different speech pacing than you'd expect in order to sound good to the audience - it's different than normal speech patterns - much slower with more dramatic pauses and enunciation.
Cool though - it was fun to watch. Post more if you got 'em
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